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제목 Request for complaint sample 등록일 2022-04-26
내용 You sent us the analysis report of complaint sample the last time and it helped us much to understand the results.
However our managers in QA team had some difficulties responding to the customer complaints about the foreign substances.
We would like to prevent the reoccurrence of similar problems by identifying the root cause of the complaint sample.

We would like to ask you to keep the thoes things above in mind during the quality control and manufacturing.
We consider that the great quality of products is due to your hard work and professionalism.
담당강사 Heni2 등록일 2022-04-26
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You sent us the analysis report of THE complaint sample the last time and it helped us VERY much to understand the results.
However(,) our managers in THE QA team had some difficulties responding to the customer complaints about the foreign substances.
We would like to prevent the reoccurrence of similar problems by identifying the root cause of the complaint sample.

We would like to ask you to keep the Previously Mentioned REMARKS (thoSE(es)( things above )in mind during (the) quality control and manufacturing.
We ARE AWARE (consider) that the great quality of products is due to your hard work and professionalism.

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