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제목 | The effects of poverty on an individual (1) | 등록일 | 2022-04-26 |
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내용 | It's divided on the aspect of positive and negative. It’s affecting a whole of an individual life. The individual of environment, habits, even personality is affected by poverty. Someone who experienced poverty is different from normal. I will call someone is as the poor. What's different from? I think poverty throws the poor in a very difficult environment. A very difficult environment,like if the poor want to eat something, but the poor didn’t buy to food because the poor don’t have enough money. The poor don’t get some food, clothes, and what they want due to poverty. |
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담당강사 | Lisa1 | 등록일 | 2022-04-27 |
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