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| 제목 | The effects of poverty on an individual (2) | 등록일 | 2022-04-28 |
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| 내용 | <<Dear Lisa, I think you mentioned it means “Absolute poverty” and there are no positive effects in extreme poverty, but poverty what I thought is of relative poverty which means “low-income”. and I think relative poverty has positive effects paradoxically. I’m sorry to confuse you. I'm a thoughtful person. Please let me know whenever I say something weird. I appreciate your concern. Thank you.>> (Continuing the previous writing) Also, having no money may make me jealous of rich people around me. I have resented my poor environment. Poverty has a positive aspect. It's paradoxical. |
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| 담당강사 | Lisa1 | 등록일 | 2022-04-29 |
| 첨삭 내용 | (It may be better to define the topic as "low-income versus high-income," rather than being about poverty.) Also, having no money may make me jealous of richer people around me. |
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