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내용 Honestly, I had been not sure that wildfire was related to climate change. Outbreak of a Wildfire has vivid causes such as arsonists, a careless trakker or an electric spark caused by someone's behaviour. Thanks to this article, now I can recognise how close we are on the edge of the climate crisis again. The news that almost every year I have heard about the forest fire in the US is another signal. It is definitely a silent warning. Put aside of the urgence of the climate change, we are already well aware of the danger of fire risk.
담당강사 Geraldine 등록일 2022-05-27
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Honestly, I had been not sure that wildfire was related to climate change. The outbreak of a Wildfire has vivid causes such as arsonists, a careless tracker or an electric spark caused by someone's behaviour. Thanks to this article, now I can recognise how close we are on the edge of the climate crisis again. The news that almost every year I have heard about the forest fire in the US is another signal. It is definitely a silent warning. Put aside the urgency of the climate change, we are already well aware of the danger of fire risk.

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