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제목 | My Dream | 등록일 | 2022-05-30 |
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내용 | If there is no limit in my life. I want to go every countries in the world. I want to see all mountains, rivers and oceans. And next if I have a power, I want to make good thing for everybody. I want to make endless peace in the world. Nobody fights everyday. Nobody kills somebody everyday. In that world, Someday guns will become a legend. I hope that people love each others. Sometimes I think My dream world is so boring. But boring is the best circumstance to improve something. I want to make totally boring world. |
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담당강사 | April | 등록일 | 2022-05-30 |
첨삭 내용 | If there is no limit in my life, I want to go to every county in the world. I want to see all the mountains, rivers and oceans. Next, if I have a power, I want to make a good thing for everybody. I want to make endless peace in the world. Nobody has to fight everyday. Nobody has to kill somebody. In that world, someday, guns will become just a legend. I hope that people love each other. Sometimes I think My dream world is so boring. But boredom is the best way to improve something. I want to make a totally boring world. ------------------------------------------ Hi Suyeong!
Thank you for sending your composition and for sharing about your dreams. I hope the corrections above help. ^^ |