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제목 My Dream 등록일 2022-05-30
내용 If there is no limit in my life.
I want to go every countries in the world.
I want to see all mountains, rivers and oceans.
And next if I have a power, I want to make good thing for everybody.
I want to make endless peace in the world.
Nobody fights everyday. Nobody kills somebody everyday.
In that world, Someday guns will become a legend.
I hope that people love each others.
Sometimes I think My dream world is so boring.
But boring is the best circumstance to improve something.
I want to make totally boring world.
담당강사 April 등록일 2022-05-30
첨삭 내용

If there is no limit in my lifeI want to go to every county in the world. I want to see all the mountains, rivers and oceans. Next, if I have a power, I want to make a good thing for everybody. I want to make endless peace in the world. Nobody has to fight everyday. Nobody has to kill somebody. In that world, someday, guns will become just a legend. I hope that people love each other. Sometimes I think My dream world is so boring. But boredom is the best way to improve something. I want to make a totally boring world.

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