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제목 Do you agree that good things come to those who wait or do you think people should actively go after 등록일 2022-08-09
내용 I prefer that people should actively go after what they want.
Good results can be known right.
Employers or chiefs tend to cheat employees in order not to pay appropriate compensations.
Meanwhile, taking patience without reward confuses people about whether they do right thing.
Pursuing what they want actively is able to achieve goals.
The best things since sliced bread take long time for results.
However, tasting small pieces of bread is necessary in the middle.
담당강사 Brandiss2usa 등록일 2022-08-10
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I believe people should actively go after what they want.
Good results can come from this.
Employers tend to cheat their employees in order not to pay the appropriate compensations.
Meanwhile, patience without reward confuses people about whether they do the right thing.
Pursuing what they want actively is the ability to achieve goals.
The best thing since sliced bread may take a long time for results.
However, tasting small pieces of bread is necessary during the process.

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