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제목 Novel 1 등록일 2022-08-22
내용 The day was really rainy day.
A man was wandering around the company.
He looked like lost something in the office.
Unfortunately, The company was locked. He thought how he can enter the gate.
He didn't want to make any trouble but he left really important thing in his drawer.
That is the ring. Actually today he planed to propose to his girlfriend.
He really needed that ring urgently because his dinner apponintment is at 7 p.m.
Now 6 p.m. He just got 20 minutes. Because the restaurant is so far from the office. It takes almost 40 minutes. He decided to breake the gate. But It was so strong.
담당강사 rosey 등록일 2022-08-23
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It was a really rainy day.
A man was wandering around the company.
He looked like lost something in the office.
Unfortunately, The company was locked. He thought about how he can enter the gate.
He didn't want to make any trouble, but he left a really important thing in his drawer.
That is the ring. Actually, today he planned to propose to his girlfriend.
He really needed that ring urgently because his dinner appointment is at 7 p.m.
Now it's already 6 p.m. He just got 20 minutes. Because the restaurant is so far from the office. It takes almost 40 minutes. He decided to break the gate. But it was well built. 

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