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제목 Novel2 등록일 2022-08-29
내용 He failed to broke the door. He fell in the misery. He decided to give up.
He drived his car to the restaurant. When he arrived the restaurant, his girl friend didn't arrive yet. He rested assured.
At 7:00, His girl friend arrived the restaurant. She looked like gorgous today. She put on really nice dress.
This fashion made him be nervous. Shi sit and said.
"Are you OK? You looks a little nervous."
"I'm Ok, I just lost something."
"Oh, What?"
"No matter what that is, I just want to say something important to you."
"What is that? I'm really curious about that."
"Let's it food first, Isn't it?"
담당강사 rosey 등록일 2022-08-30
첨삭 내용

He failed to break the door. He fell into misery. He decided to give up.
He drove his car to the restaurant. When he arrived at the restaurant, his girlfriend has not arrived yet. He rested assured.
At 7:00, His girlfriend arrived at the restaurant. She looked gorgeous today. She put on a really nice dress.
This fashion made him nervous. She sits and said.
"Are you OK? You look a little nervous."
"I'm Ok, I just lost something."
"Oh, What?"
"No matter what that is, I just want to say something important to you."
"What is that? I'm really curious about that."
"Let's it food first, Isn't it?"

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