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제목 | Today lunch | 등록일 | 2022-09-14 |
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내용 | Since a long holidays, Chuseok, Korean thanksgiving Day I have been slammed. To save time , I picked sandwich for a lunch and I wanted to have a new menu in a lunch today. A few weeks ago, there was fancy sandwich shop which was opening near in my company. I thought I visit there soon. As soon as I got that shop, I ordered signature menu by an unattended order. It melted on my tongue, it's out of this world. the one was more tasty than I expected and It's worth a return visit. |
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담당강사 | Neiz | 등록일 | 2022-09-14 |
첨삭 내용 | Since
Some sentences were changed to replace some wordy, faulty tense sequence and unclear sentences. As well as to make it more simplified. -Teacher Neiz |