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제목	May I ask your proof-reading for my e-mail?	등록일	2022-09-16
내용	Hi, Risa Thanks for your reply and for sending the picture of the pretty princess. Ria has grown up a lot! She is so cute! As for Jasmine, I also don’t know why Dai san thought she was not ready to be promoted to assistant manager. His expectation might be too high for her, and I still don’t understand. I thought that she was good enough to be promoted. When I talked with Jasmine via UC, she said she wanted to do more marketing than operational work. I can talk more deeply when she visits Seoul in Dec. I’ll encourage her for the next challenge. Thanks Best Regards JH BAE
담당강사	shelby1usa	등록일	2022-09-19
첨삭 내용	Hi Risa, Thanks for your reply and for sending the picture of the pretty princess. Ria has grown up a lot! She is so cute! As for Jasmine, I also don’t know why Dai san thought she was not ready to be promoted to assistant manager. His expectation was not high enough for her, and I still don’t understand. I thought that she was good enough to be promoted. When I talked with Jasmine via UC, she said she wanted to do more marketing than operational work. I can talk more deeply with her when she visits Seoul in Dec. I’ll encourage her for the next challenge. Thanks Best Regards JH BAE

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