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제목 | My lunch Menu | 등록일 | 2022-09-19 |
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내용 | I ate bibimbab, is based on rice, fried egg and various vegetables, for lunch today. It's tasty very healthy for people. That why Korean soul food and I love it. After medical check-up this year, I got my medical report from hospital. It said my level of cholesterol is a bit higher than same age one. So I need to be cautious about having a food. I am going to try to cut down meat, pork, butter like high cholesterol foods. |
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담당강사 | Neiz | 등록일 | 2022-09-19 |
첨삭 내용 | I ate bibimbab, |