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제목 My lunch Menu 등록일 2022-09-19
내용 I ate bibimbab, is based on rice, fried egg and various vegetables, for lunch today.
It's tasty very healthy for people. That why Korean soul food and I love it.
After medical check-up this year, I got my medical report from hospital.
It said my level of cholesterol is a bit higher than same age one. So I need to be cautious about having a food.
I am going to try to cut down meat, pork, butter like high cholesterol foods.
담당강사 Neiz 등록일 2022-09-19
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I ate bibimbab, based on it has rice, fried egg and various vegetables, for lunch today.
It's tasty and very healthy for people. That's why Korean food is a soul food and I love it.
After my medical check-up this year, I got my medical result from the hospital.
It says that my level of cholesterol is a bit higher for my age compared to others my age. So I need to be cautious about the food I eat.
I am going to try to cut down meat, pork, butter like and other food with high cholesterol.

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