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제목 When I read your proof sentence, it is very helpful. So, can you check my sentence for me again? 등록일 2022-09-20
내용 Thank you for your interest my workshop.

The workshop will be available on July 15, Because I will business trip at france on June. If you don’t have time, feel free to call me.

When I gave a seminar, I had two problems.

Firstly, computer is not working on properly. So, the seminar delayed 20 minutes. Can you check computer please?

Second, I need to a large conference room. I went there last week, it is not enough to allow people to talk 30 people. So, can you make a reservation for me?

Thanks
담당강사 india1usa 등록일 2022-09-21
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Thank you for your interest in my workshop. 

The workshop will be available on July 15th because I will be on a business trip to France in June. If you don’t have time, feel free to call me.

When I gave a seminar, I had two problems.  [because this opening sentence about your experience is in the past tense, you'll need to put the sentences below in past tense as well]

Firstly, the computer was not working properly. So, the seminar was delayed [by] 20 minutes. Can you check the computer, please?   

Secondly, I needed a large conference room. I went there last week, but it is not large enough to hold/fit  30 people. So, can you make a reservation for me?

Thanks

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