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제목 Essey (Taking picture) 등록일 2022-09-29
내용 Recently, taking picture is my hobby.
Esspecially I like to take a picture of sky.
I have a account on instagram. I am a photographer in the Instagram.
If I don't take pictures, I just watch the Netflix.
I think taking pictures is good for me because I can forget everything when i take pictures.
It makes me peaceful.
I don't have to worry about working, caring children and money.
But there is a bad thing.
I spend so many time for uploading pictures.
I choose the good picture, fix the picture.
Sometimes I check my instagram for checking visitors.
But I love taking picture.
담당강사 rosey 등록일 2022-09-30
첨삭 내용

Recently, taking pictures has been my hobby.
Especially I like to take a picture of the sky.
I have an account on Instagram. I am a photographer on Instagram.
If I don't take pictures, I just watch Netflix.
I think taking pictures is good for me because I can forget everything when I take pictures.
It makes me peaceful.
I don't have to worry about working, caring for children, and money.
But there is a bad thing.
I spend a lot of time uploading pictures.
I choose the best picture and edit it.
Sometimes I check my Instagram for checking visitors.
But I love taking pictures.

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