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제목 | Essey (Taking picture) | 등록일 | 2022-09-29 |
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내용 | Recently, taking picture is my hobby. Esspecially I like to take a picture of sky. I have a account on instagram. I am a photographer in the Instagram. If I don't take pictures, I just watch the Netflix. I think taking pictures is good for me because I can forget everything when i take pictures. It makes me peaceful. I don't have to worry about working, caring children and money. But there is a bad thing. I spend so many time for uploading pictures. I choose the good picture, fix the picture. Sometimes I check my instagram for checking visitors. But I love taking picture. |
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담당강사 | rosey | 등록일 | 2022-09-30 |
첨삭 내용 | Recently, taking pictures has been my hobby. |