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제목 My weekend 등록일 2022-10-03
내용 I went to Ilsan city that is located in north of Gyeonggi-do to meet my cousin's family.
He stay on top of things about the stock and often explain what's going on that to me.
They live in an apartment village that has two guest rooms. They made a reservation one of them for us.
So we stay there one night two days. My cousin has a cute daughter who is 4 years. My daughter and her are just one year different.
So they are having pretty good relationship.
When my daughter were going back home, She dragged her feet.
It meant that the time with her was very interesting and fun for her.
담당강사 Neiz 등록일 2022-10-04
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I went to Ilsan city, which is located in the north of Gyeonggi-do, to meet my cousin's family.
He stays on top of things about the stock and often explains what's going on that to me.
They live in an apartment village that has two guest rooms. They made a reservation one of them for us.
So we stayed there for one night and two days. My cousin has a cute daughter who is 4 years old. She and my daughter have just one year age gap.
So they have a pretty good relationship.
When my daughter was going back home, she dragged her feet.
It meant that the time spent with her was very interesting and fun for her.

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