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제목 hard to concentrate 등록일 2022-10-05
내용 I feel really hard to concentrate these days.
There are so many stuffs distracrt me.
Like instargram, youtube, webpages which show me that have nothing to do with me.
One day I changed my first page of internet browser as 'blank' so that I can be away from distracting.
But microsoft automatically changed my first page as MS 365 which show some news and etc.
Nowdays, it seems like that huam being can't help distracting.
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2022-10-06
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I feel really hard to concentrate these days.--It is hard for me to concentrate these days.
There are so many stuffs distracrt me.--So many things distract me, like YouTube, and web pages which show me things that have nothing to do with me.
Like instargram, youtube, webpages which show me that have nothing to do with me.
One day I changed THE first page of MY internet browser TO "blank" so that I can be away from distractIONS.
But microsoft automatically changed my first page TO MS 365 which showS some news ( and) etc.)  AND OTHER THINGS.
NowAdays, it seems  that hUMAN  beingS can't help BEING DISTRACTED. (distracting.)

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