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제목 Hello 등록일 2022-10-06
내용 Hello alex? I’m not sure Alex is your exact name. Sorry for not remembering your name because I was just wake up for your call.(6:30am is really early morning. isn’t it? thank you for your understanding.)
Today I’d like to say something that I want to learn from your class.
I think I need to improve my business english because the company I’ve worked use english a lot.
So I’d like to ask you our class focus to business after we get to know each other. :)
How about having a discussion about how we can improve business english for the next class?
Thank you a lot.
Youngnam Kim
담당강사 Jenkins1usa 등록일 2022-10-06
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Hello, Alix? I’m not sure Alix is your exact name. Sorry for not remembering your name because I just woke up for your call. (6:30 am is really early morning. isn’t it? thank you for your understanding.)
Today I’d like to say something that I want to learn from your class.
I think I need to improve my business English because the company I work for uses English a lot.
So I’d like to ask that our class focus on business English after we get to know each other. :)
How about having a discussion about how we can improve business English for the next class?
Thank you a lot.
Youngnam Kim

 

Hi! Yes, no problem at all. We can focus on business English. It might be best to use our textbook during class so we can cover more material. I was looking at your current textbook assigned and it does not teach business English. Maybe you can talk with your manager to see if you can change to a business English textbook for class. I look forward to our next class!

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