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제목 Essey 등록일 2022-10-06
내용 Watching Netflix has been my hobby.
I have an account on Netflix. I am heavy user on Netflix.
But caring for children is more important than my hobby.
So, I have no time watching Netflix in the home.
I usally watch Netflix in the subway a lot of time.
My best things in the Netflix are 'Love, death, robot', 'Rick and Morty'.
They are si-fy serise. They are beyond my imagination.
Every episodes lead me to the amazing world.
In this autumm new season of Rick and Morty start.
I already watched episode 1. It's really good bus not best.
I've been waiting next episode eagerly.
담당강사 rosey 등록일 2022-10-07
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Essay

Watching Netflix has been my hobby.
I have an account with Netflix. I am a heavy user of Netflix.
But caring for children is more important than my hobby.
So, I have no time watching Netflix in the home.
I usually watch Netflix on the subway a lot of time.
My best things in the Netflix are 'Love, death, robot', 'Rick and Morty'.
They are sci-fi series. They are beyond my imagination.
Every episode leads me to the amazing world.
In this autumn new season of Rick and Morty start.
I already watched episode 1. It's really good, but not best.
I've been waiting for the next episode eagerly.

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