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제목 Today is Sunday. 등록일 2022-10-09
내용 Today, the children and I went to the indoor gym. I went to play Badminton, but there were so many people that I had to wait for an hour. Maybe it was raining, so other people came to do indoor exercise with the same thought as me. I saw on the news that it will rain again tomorrow, and I think I will go to fight with my children. I should make a lot of time to spend with my children.
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Today, the children and I went to the indoor gym. I went to play Badminton, but there were so many people that I had to wait for an hour. Maybe it was raining, so other people came to do indoor exercise with the same thought as me. I saw on the news that it will rain again tomorrow, and I think I will go to fight with my children. I should make a lot of time to spend with my children.

 

Hello, Jake, how are you today? That's great to hear that you spent time with your family! It sounds like you all had an interesting and fun time. Enjoy yourselves and talk to you soon!

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