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제목 My weekend 등록일 2022-10-11
내용 I was supposed to visit my uncle's memorial park with my family on last saturday. However, my lovely daughter got high fever early in the morning. It's about until 39 degree. My wife and i was worried and decided not to visit there.
Even though I was very sorry to him, I have no choice. the most important thing is her condition at that time.
So we stayed home three days in a row.
담당강사 Neiz 등록일 2022-10-11
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I was supposed to visit my uncle's memorial park with my family on last Saturday. However, my lovely daughter got a high fever early in the morning. It's about until 39 degrees. My wife and I was worried and decided not to visit there. Even though I was very sorry to him, I had no choice. The most important thing was her condition at that time. So, we stayed home three days in a row.

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