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제목 Hello teacher 등록일 2022-10-18
내용 It was really nice to meet you. Today I’m going to write to you why I have to get up early every morning. I’ll appreciate it for your correction to my writing.
There are two reasons that I have to wake up very early in the morning. One is to prepare to go to workplace. It takes about one and half hour. I have to go to work by 9’o clock. I need to leave my home at 7:20 at least. The second reason is to stroll with my puppy. He is kinda picky dog.. So He never eat food until some conditions are satisfied for him. Stolling is a one of these conditions. That’s why I should get up early!
담당강사 Tristan1 등록일 2022-10-21
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It was really nice to meet you. Today I’m going to write to you why I have to get up early every morning. **I'd / I would appreciate it **any correction *of my writing.
There are two reasons that I have to wake up very early in the morning. One is to **simply prepare to go to work. It takes about one and *a half *hours. I have to *be at work by 9’o clock *in the morning; *so I need to leave my home *by at leas 7:20 **to get there on time. The second reason is to **have enough time to go on a stroll with my puppy. He is kinda picky **for a dog.. So He never *eats food until some conditions are satisfied for him. ***Going out for a stroll is one of these conditions. That’s why I **have to get up early!

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