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| 제목 | Machine to harvest | 등록일 | 2022-10-25 |
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| 내용 | We used a machine to dig up the ground to harvest crops. This machine is a multipurpose vehicle looking like a motorbike but has two wheels at the front. Its real part is designed to be replaced by a different equipment depending on the purpose of use. The crop to harvest is buried in the soil and this machine digs up the soil to make it appear as it goes forward. If it had not been for this machine, I should have used a shovel to dig the soil. |
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| 담당강사 | DavidB2usa | 등록일 | 2022-10-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | We used a machine to dig up the ground to harvest crops. This machine is a multipurpose vehicle that looks like a motorbike but has two wheels at the front. Its real part is designed to be replaced by a different piece of equipment depending on the purpose. |
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