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| 제목 | China, the problem | 등록일 | 2022-10-25 |
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| 내용 | In diplomacy, it is customary to consider other country on equal footing even if there is big a difference in economic and diplomatic power. However, the way China regards other countries does not seem to follow the international norms. Many Chinese officials blatantly say they are superior than Korea and this would continue to be worse. China does everything to enforce its propaganda and its supporter is not hesitant to induce a violence against whoever opposes them. If global economy depends more on Chinese economy, this phenomenon would exacerbate in the long term. |
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| 담당강사 | DavidB2usa | 등록일 | 2022-10-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | In diplomacy, it is customary to consider other countries on equal footing even if there is a big difference in economic and diplomatic power. However, the way China regards other countries does not seem to follow international norms. Many Chinese officials blatantly say they are superior to Korea, which would continue to worsen. China does everything to enforce its propaganda and its supporters are not hesitant to commit violence against whoever opposes them. If the global economy depends more on the Chinese economy, this phenomenon could be exacerbated in the long term. |
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