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| 제목 | Monday, November 21th,, 2022 fine | 등록일 | 2022-11-21 |
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| 내용 | I went to celerbrate my brother in law’ birthday with my family on Saturday. We already prepared to hand-writing letter, gifts and tasty cake. We had a great cuisine my mom and my wife made in dinner. After dinner, we light a candle on cake and sang a birthday song to him. Then, he was very satisfied with a big smile. Lastly, my lovely daughter went to kiss on his cheek. |
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| 담당강사 | Neiz | 등록일 | 2022-11-22 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I went to celebrate my brother-in-law’s birthday with my family last Saturday.
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