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제목 | Answer to the Question "Describe you home"_1 | 등록일 | 2022-11-29 |
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내용 | Oh, so you wanna know about my place...alright, well. My home isn't all that small. I think It is wide enough to invite many friends. You see, It means I can have a great time in my home with my freinds! by eating delicous foods playing games. I live in a studio. It is divided into two spaces. One space is kichen and living room and the other space is bedroom. Last month I invited seven friends. And We ate Kimbob and Ramen in my home. It was very delicious. We had a good time together. I was very happy to have a good time with my friends because of my large enough home. | ||
담당강사 | Neal2 | 등록일 | 2022-11-29 |
첨삭 내용 | Oh, so you wanna know about my place...alright, well. My home isn't all that small. I think It is wide enough to invite many friends. You see, It means I can have a great time in my home with my freinds! by eating delicous foods playing games. I live in a studio. It is divided into two spaces. One space is kichen and living room and the other space is bedroom. Last month I invited seven friends. And We ate Kimbob and Ramen in my home. It was very delicious. We had a good time together. I was very happy to have a good time with my friends because of my large enough home.
Yechan, I am writing a reply with corrections. Look for it tomorrow. |