Yechan, you did a fine job writing your story.  Here is my response to your two messages.  Let's talk about what you wrote and my changes during a class this week.  

Oh, so you wanna know about my place?  Alright.  Well, my home isn’t all that small.  I think it is wide enough for me to invite my friends.  You see, the size of my home allows me to have great times at home with my friends, eating delicious food and playing games.  I live in a studio apartment.  It is divided into two spaces.  One space is the living room and kitchen; the other is the bedroom.  Last month I hosted seven friends.  We ate kimbob and ramen, which were very delicious.  We had a good time together.  I was very happy the my house is large enough to entertain so many friends.

Later today I’m going to invite friends to my apartment to play games, like Nintendo Witch!  I’m getting excited, because it’s just so interesting.  For some games, players lots of room to make their violent moves.  But, you know?  There is no problem, because my home is just spacious enough.  I can’t wait until they arrive; I really want to hang out with my friends.