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| 제목 | Tuesday, Desember 6th, 2022 snow | 등록일 | 2022-12-06 |
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| 내용 | South Korea soccer team matched with Brazil in round of 16 world cup yesterday. It has been 12 years since 2010 world cup, which went to round of 16. I am pretty big fan of soccer. So I felt like i was on cloud nine and can't wait to watch it. The match kicked off at 4 a.m. My wife and I went to the bed earlier than normal sleep time. Many people already knew that Brazil is the strongest soccer team in the world. I think it was very hard challenge to South Korea soccer team. Although we was beat by Brazil in 4-1, I am very proud of them and root for our team. |
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| 담당강사 | Neiz | 등록일 | 2022-12-06 |
| 첨삭 내용 | South Korea soccer team had a match with Brazil in round of 16 world cup this morning. |
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