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제목 | House moving party | 등록일 | 2022-12-26 |
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내용 | I went to my brother-in-law's house last Sunday for attending the house moving party he threw. Actually, we have a system to give the people the right to buy the house at the reasonable price. People, who have been for a long time without the house and also have many mouths to feed, rank high among others in National House Supply System(NHSS) and then have more chance to get the ticket to buy the house priced lower in the market. Over the last 3 years, the government around the globe has eased the monetary policy. As a result, we have ended up with the asset price bubble. (To be continue) | ||
담당강사 | Heni1 | 등록일 | 2022-12-26 |
첨삭 내용 | I went to my brother-in-law's house last Sunday TO ATTEND (for attending) the house moving party he threw. Actually, we have a system THAT GIVES ( to give) (the) people the right to buy A house at A reasonable price. People(,) who have been without A house FOR A LONG TIME and also have many mouths to feed, rank high among others in THE National House Supply System(NHSS) and theY have A HIGHER chance to get A ticket to buy A house priced lower in the market. Over the last THREE years, the governmentS around the globe haVE eased (?the monetary policy?).ON HOUSING. As a result, we have ended up with the asset price bubble. (To be continueD) |