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제목 Hang out with a friend. 등록일 2023-01-03
내용 I hung out with a friend yesterday.
I wanted to watch a movie in the theater.
(or I wanted to go to the movies.)
Because I hadn’t done that in a while.
(or that I hadn’t done that in a while.)
After that, we didn’t do too much. We just had a dinner at chinese place and talked for a couple of hours.
(or We just had dinner at Chinese place and..)

*I wrote one more sentence with () when I’m not sure which one is better.
담당강사 JonathanW1usa 등록일 2023-01-04
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I hung out with a friend yesterday.
I wanted to watch a movie in the theater. (or "at the theater")
(or I wanted to go to the movies.) - both of these sentences sound good
Because I hadn’t done that in a while. - this sounds better when directly attached to the previous sentence when you use the word "because"
(or that I hadn’t done that in a while.) - this sentence stands alone better as a following statement
After that, we didn’t do too much. We just had a dinner at a Chinese place and talked for a couple of hours. - the phrase you want is "we just had dinner" (I like your use of the transition "After that, we didn't do too much")
(or We just had dinner at Chinese place and..) - remember to include "a" prior to the restaurant type

*I wrote one more sentence with () when I’m not sure which one is better. - "when I wasn't sure"

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