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제목 My today 등록일 2023-01-09
내용 I dated with stranger last night.

I was worried that he would ask me to meet him.

Actually, He asked me to meet again. But, I had to refused meeting.

Because I wasn't curious about him.


I met my co-worker I worked with.

We talked about what's new and had a great time with oyster.


The reason why day-off was appointment with the restaurant.

I had a appointment to write a review the restaurant.

I write a review on my blog. The menu was clam stew.

In the clam stew, there were lots of seafood like ear shell and squid, clam.

I had a wonderful dinner with my father.



담당강사 KatieP2usa 등록일 2023-01-11
첨삭 내용

I dated with stranger last night.   ------->  Correction - I went on a date with a stranger last night.

I was worried that he would ask me to meet him.  ------> This statement is correct.

Actually, He asked me to meet again. But, I had to refused meeting. --------> Actually, he asked me to meet again but I told him no.

Because I wasn't curious about him. ---------> Because I wasn't interested in him.


I met my co-worker I worked with.   -------> I met with my co-worker ( you don't need to add "I worked with," because co-worker already implies that)

We talked about what's new and had a great time with oyster. ------> We ate oysters and talked about what's new, we had a great time OR We had a great time talking about what's new while eating oysters.


The reason why day-off was appointment with the restaurant. -------> I had the day-off because I had a reservation at the restaurant. (appoinments usually refer to doctor' s appointments)

I had a appointment to write a review the restaurant.   ------>  I had a reservation to write a review with the restaurant.

I write a review on my blog. The menu was clam stew.  -----> I write reviews on my blog. The menu had clam stew.

In the clam stew, there were lots of seafood like ear shell and squid, clam.  ----->  In the clam stew, there was a lot of different types of seafood like (ear?) shellfish, squid, and clams.

I had a wonderful dinner with my father. -----> No corrections!

 

Well done, let me know if you have any questions about the corrections




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