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My today |
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2023-01-09 |
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I dated with stranger last night.
I was worried that he would ask me to meet him.
Actually, He asked me to meet again. But, I had to refused meeting.
Because I wasn't curious about him.
I met my co-worker I worked with.
We talked about what's new and had a great time with oyster.
The reason why day-off was appointment with the restaurant.
I had a appointment to write a review the restaurant.
I write a review on my blog. The menu was clam stew.
In the clam stew, there were lots of seafood like ear shell and squid, clam.
I had a wonderful dinner with my father.
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KatieP2usa |
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2023-01-11 |
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I dated with stranger last night. -------> Correction - I went on a date with a stranger last night.
I was worried that he would ask me to meet him. ------> This statement is correct.
Actually, He asked me to meet again. But, I had to refused meeting. --------> Actually, he asked me to meet again but I told him no.
Because I wasn't curious about him. ---------> Because I wasn't interested in him.
I met my co-worker I worked with. -------> I met with my co-worker ( you don't need to add "I worked with," because co-worker already implies that)
We talked about what's new and had a great time with oyster. ------> We ate oysters and talked about what's new, we had a great time OR We had a great time talking about what's new while eating oysters.
The reason why day-off was appointment with the restaurant. -------> I had the day-off because I had a reservation at the restaurant. (appoinments usually refer to doctor' s appointments)
I had a appointment to write a review the restaurant. ------> I had a reservation to write a review with the restaurant.
I write a review on my blog. The menu was clam stew. -----> I write reviews on my blog. The menu had clam stew.
In the clam stew, there were lots of seafood like ear shell and squid, clam. -----> In the clam stew, there was a lot of different types of seafood like (ear?) shellfish, squid, and clams.
I had a wonderful dinner with my father. -----> No corrections!
Well done, let me know if you have any questions about the corrections
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