수강기간 중 영어로 일기 또는 자유로운 글을 작성해 주세요.
담당 강사가 직접 교정을 해 드립니다.
제목 | two paragraphs | 등록일 | 2023-01-27 |
---|---|---|---|
내용 | You know what? A new bagel cafe opened right by my place. It’s so cool. It’s a 3 minute drive from my house and it has a huge space so I don’t have to worry about being crowded. A new machine has installed at the funeral. It’s so convenient. You can remit money with your credit card so you don’t have to worry about having cash with you. |
||
담당강사 | JonathanW1usa | 등록일 | 2023-01-27 |
첨삭 내용 | You know what? A new bagel cafe opened right by my place. It’s so cool. It’s a 3 minute drive from my house and it has a huge space so I don’t have to worry about being crowded.
***Please see today's notes for corrections =) |