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제목 | My diary | 등록일 | 2023-02-08 |
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내용 | My colleagues and I went out to have a lunch at noon today. We decided to go to bibimbap joint where we regular visit. But unfortunately, it was closed due to owner’ covid-19 infection, so we didn’t have a choice to visit next to similar the one. After lunch, I was impressed by price and flavor. This joint is not expensive as other bibimbap’s one. |
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담당강사 | Neiz | 등록일 | 2023-02-09 |
첨삭 내용 | My colleagues and I went out to have
Hi Tony, Here's the reconstruction of what you've writen to make it clearer to read. My colleagues and I went out to have lunch at noon today. |