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제목 Road to work 등록일 2023-03-16
내용 Road to Work
I have 3 kinds of method to go my office.
First,  getting on the subway.
This is had the advantage to keep the time.
Then I think this is the highest priority of methods.
Second, getting on the bus.
This is had the advantage that it is not walked much.
But, this is needed much wating time followed the situation.
Then I think this is lowest priority of methods.
Finally driving the car.
This is had the advantage to take the comfort.
But, this is not enough me for walking time.
Then I think this is middle priority of methods.
담당강사 Heni2 등록일 2023-03-16
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Road to Work
I have 3 WAYS to go my office.
First IS the subway.
This is THE FASTEST WAY.
SO IT IS MY FAVORITE WAY.
Second, TAKING THE bus.
This is 
But, this is needed much wating time followed the situation.
Then I think this is lowest priority of methods.
Finally driving the car.
This is had the advantage to take the comfort.
But, this is not enough me for walking time.
Then I think this is middle priority of methods.

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