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제목 Business Trip 등록일 2023-03-23
내용 Business trips
Actually I am going for solving the problem of product.
We made the new technology product, but, the one have problems because the term made is short.
Then I think that new product is birthed having destiny normally.
But we will go to step by step with our products, solving some problems.
Then I believe that we'll meet the perfect product.
담당강사 Heni2 등록일 2023-03-23
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Business trips
Actually(,)9 I am going TO SOLVE  the problem of A product.
We made the new technology product, but,) the one haS problems because the term made is short.
(Then I think that new product is birthed having destiny normally.)???
But we will go to step by step with our products, solving some problems.
Then I believe that we'll DEVELOP the perfect product.

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