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제목 | I share yesterday topic post | 등록일 | 2023-03-24 |
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내용 | Hi lucky I share the instagram url which is yesterday topic I will explain the post, so can you correct it https://www.instagram.com/p/CqIXAF-yND2/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y%3D the second page is when I met a zebra in front of my house, I make a u-turn very natually. lol the third page video was surprised to find a runaway zebra on the road. but the reason why they was really surprised is because zebra is very handsome the 6 page picture description : is there a zebra on the streat like a streat cat in korea? the 7 to 10 page is a picture of a zebra running away from a nearby zoo HAND lucky |
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담당강사 | Neal2 | 등록일 | 2023-03-24 |
첨삭 내용 | Hi lucky the third page video was surprised to find a runaway zebra on the road. but the reason why they was really surprised is because zebra is very handsome I AM NOT CERTAIN THAT YOU CAN LINK THE FEELING OF SURPRISE WITH HOW HANDSOME THE ZRBRA IS. I WOULD BE SURPRISED EVEN IF AN UGLY ZEBRA WAS RUNNING WITH THE TRAFFIC IN THE STREET! LOL THE REASON THAT i WAS REALLY SURPRISED IS BECAUSE "THE" ZEBRA IS VERY HANDSOME. YOU MUST USE AN ARTICLE (A, AN, OR THE) IN FRONT OF A SINGULAR NOUN LIKE ZEBRA. the 6 page picture description : is there a zebra on the streat like a streat cat in korea? VERY FUNNY COMMENT - CATS ACTUALLY CAN HAVE STRIPES, BUT NOT BLACK AND WHITE. LOL the 7 to 10 page is a picture of a zebra running away from a nearby zoo EXCELLENT ENGLISH. I ENJOYED THESE PHOTOS AND THE VIDEO VERY MUCH, THANK YOU FOR SHARING THEM WITH ME - IT HAS MADE MY FRIDAY START OF HAPPILY! Dongwan, , I have opened your message, but right now I have to prepare for today's classes. When my school day is finished, I will fully rreply to your message. Thank you for sending this...I am excited to look at it and respond to you. Enjoy your day! Lucky |