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제목 Spring 등록일 2023-03-29
내용 Now. Korea in the spring.
Cherry blossoms have bloomed everywhere.
Their pink color make people are happy.
Recently, Spring comes faster than past.
But weather is still a little cold.
I haven't put off my coat yet.
I want to see cherry blossoms because ther aren't many around my city.
2 years ago, I had lived in Jinhae. All trees in Jinhae are almost cherry blossoms.
So in Spring, Jinhae is the beutiful city in Korea.
Every where you can see big and tall cherry blossoms.
Now I know why people miss their hometown.
I can remember falling cherry blossoms leaves.
The most beautiful falling.
담당강사 rosey 등록일 2023-03-30
첨삭 내용

Now, Korea is in the Spring.
Cherry blossoms have bloomed everywhere.
Their pink color makes people happy.
Recently, Spring has come faster than in the past.
But the weather is still a little cold.
I haven't put off my coat yet.
I want to see cherry blossoms because they aren't many around my city.
2 years ago, I lived in Jinhae. All trees in Jinhae are almost Cherry blossoms.
So in the Spring, Jinhae is the most beautiful city in Korea because the falling leaves
Everywhere you can see big and tall cherry blossoms.
Now I know why people miss their hometown.
I can remember the falling leaves of cherry blossoms, very beautiful. 

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