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제목 | Making a sentences using expressions from the previous class | 등록일 | 2023-03-30 |
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내용 | I went out along with my mother yesterday. I haven’t spent time with her for a long time because I had a excuse for a busy. She was excited to go out with me. We enjoyed fabulous dinner and I promised her to the following gathering. |
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담당강사 | Neiz | 등록일 | 2023-03-30 |
첨삭 내용 | I went out along with my mother yesterday.
Hi Tony, Thank you for this. I read and made some changes to simplify the statement and highligted some words and phrases that should be included in this writing. You may review yours and the one I changed. Overall, it was just a few and I'm sure it would improve.
Teacher Neiz
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