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| 제목 | 03 April 2023 | 등록일 | 2023-04-03 |
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| 내용 | Staying healthy is one of my latest aim for 2023. Until now, I eagerly want to finish my doctoral degree, so I couldn't focus on my health indeed. Otherwise, aspects of my job, I usually stayed all night long in the office to write a thesis. It makes me weaker than in my early 30s. Luckily, my family started a new approach to having veggies these days. So I also have tried for two weeks. The veggie juice recipe is simple. We just put a blender with seasonal veggies and something rigid is blanched then also blended well. We just have 2 meals alternating our traditional meal with veggie juice. | ||
| 담당강사 | Sofia | 등록일 | 2023-04-04 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Staying healthy is one of my latest goals for 2023. Until now, I eagerly wanted to finish my doctoral degree but I couldn't focus on my health. I am required to stay all night long in the office just to write a thesis, It makes me weaker than in my early 30s. The good thing is my family has adopted a new approach to eating veggies these days, so I am trying it for two weeks. The veggie juice recipe is simple, we simply put seasonal vegetables in a blender, blanched and blended thoroughly. We have our meals with our veggie juice. |
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