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제목 | 04 April 2023 | 등록일 | 2023-04-04 |
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내용 | I felt unwell because of a menstrual issue yesterday. So I came back home early at an unusual drop-by bakery and bought some bread that I never had in ordinary condition. While doing foot bathing, I had veggie juice with the sweetest bread. My dad hasn’t understudied why I enjoy enormous carbo parties every month but that kind of snack makes me relaxed and happy even if I suffered from stomach. Also, I have ruled out several things for my health; Firstly, I quit having dairy products (milk, cheese...) and iced beverages even for quenching days. Secondly, I never use any kind of plastic goods. | ||
담당강사 | Sofia | 등록일 | 2023-04-06 |
첨삭 내용 | I felt sick because of a menstrual issue yesterday. So I came back home early decided to drop by at the bakery, I bought some bread that I is different from the usual. While I was cleaning my feet I had my veggie juice with my sweet bread. My dad doesn't understand why I enjoy enormous carbo parties every month, those foods makes me feel relaxed and happy even though it's not good for my health. I decided to do something for my health; First, I quit having dairy products like milk and cheese, second is I'll give up ice beverages even I feel so thirsty for it and lastly I will nevery use any kinds of plastic goods. |