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| 제목 | 6 April 2023 | 등록일 | 2023-04-06 |
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| 내용 | Reading a book is the weirdest experience I have ever been to. Because it makes some experience that we never have been there but even we already have been there. When I was younger than now, I read a book called 'Dual Design'. It was written about the religious mystery at the Mont-Saint-Michel. I was shocked by the description of that place and wondered if I will go there in my 30s. Then recently I saw that place at a TV show which introduce other countries' cultural relics. I couldn't believe its appearance is similar to what I imagined before. Going there is one on my bucket list now. | ||
| 담당강사 | Sofia | 등록일 | 2023-04-13 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Reading a book is the weirdest thing that I'm doing, because it made me feel that I am there in the story. When I was young, I read a book called "Dual Design". It was written about the religious mystery at Mont-Saint-Michel, I was shocked by the discription of that place and I was wondering if I can go there in my 30's. Then recenty, I saw that place in a TV show and it was introduced as other country's "cultural relics. I couldn't believe its appearance is similar to what I have imagined before. Going there is one of my bucket list now. |
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