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| 제목 | 7 April 2023 | 등록일 | 2023-04-07 |
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| 내용 | I read a newspaper dealing with the mother and daughter of escapees from North Korea. Eventually, they met each other decades after they break up from her mother's escape from the North. As a people of the South, we couldn't know about the North because they want to be left as the world's most secretive state. But from 2019, their leader imposes crops more harshly. Though they have bad climate issues most farmers didn't set their expectative crops to pay for the government which means being left with less sometimes nothing to eat. I felt bad that we live on the same land but in different ways. | ||
| 담당강사 | Sofia | 등록일 | 2023-04-13 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I read a newspaper about the mother and daughter who escaped from North Korea. Eventually, they met again after being apart from each other. As a South Korean citizen, we don't know anything about the North because they still want to be the world's most secretive state. But in 2019, their leader imposes crops more harshly. Due to the bad climate most farmers couldn't set their expectative crops to pay for the government and it means they don't have anything left and they don't have nothing to eat. I feel bad since we live on the same land but in different ways.
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