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제목 10 April 2023 등록일 2023-04-10
내용 I went to the cat shelter last Saturday. Becoming spring, the shelter needs some volunteers who attend a cleaning whole places where cats lived. So our team gathered members who participated in doing a big cleanup. At first, we planned to go there with 6 but on Saturday we only 4 people. Furthermore, people who regularly volunteer from shelter members couldn't come this week because of their own reasons. Therefore we went to the shelter from 9:40 to 3 pm. When we finished our chores and came back home we became a being wrecked and I suffered whole weekends because of unexpected physical labor.
담당강사 Sofia 등록일 2023-04-18
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I went to the cat shelter last Saturday. The spring is coming so the shelter needs some volunteers who will clean the whole place where the cats live. Our team gathered and we did a big clean up. Six of us planned to go there but the four of us came last Saturday. Some people who regularly volunteer from the shelter couldn't come because of their personal reasons. Therefore, we went to the shelter at 9:40 until 3 pm. When we finished our chores and came back home I felt wrecked and I suffered for the whole weekend because of unexpected hardwork. 

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