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내용 Thesedays, I am so busy for Symposium.
Last 20days, I have been worked without rest.
I couldn't take a rest on weekend.
Therefore recent my conditions is bad

Besides, I work for Product manager from this month.
Everyday, I face new task and I have only person who have to solve it.
I think I spent most of concentrations and erergy to learn new job.
Therefore when I come back to home by subway after work, usually I am sleepy and I couldn't do anything.
Before this new job, I tried to do something that make me improve.

I am exhausted now.

After this class, I go to bed for sleep.
담당강사 TiffanyS2usa 등록일 2023-04-10
첨삭 내용

These days, I am very busy with the symposium.
In the past 20 days I have been working without rest.
Since I couldn't take a break on the weekends, I feel tired.

In addition, I am working with the Product Manager this month.
Everyday I face new tasks, but I have only one person to help me with them.
I think I spend most of my focus and energy on learning this new job.
Therefore, when I return home on the subway from work, I am sleepy and am too tired to do anything.
Before this new job, I tried to improve my professional skills.

I am exhausted now.

After this class, I will go to bed to sleep.

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