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제목 | 11 April 2023 | 등록일 | 2023-04-11 |
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내용 | I thought it is possible to be an expert in my area by 30. But I couldn't be an expert yet. Furthermore, on a journey to my job, I faced a severe weakness on me. It is that I am not a methodical person indeed. My job is quite free and gives me an extraordinarily fruitful feeling but it also requires me as a person who is perfect with the organization of data file sets. So every year, especially on the first day of the year I buy a notebook for my schedule management. What I have my goal for 30 is fully to finish writing my yearly personal organizer but it is not easy for me to do it every day. | ||
담당강사 | Sofia | 등록일 | 2023-04-26 |
첨삭 내용 | I thought that it is possible to be an expert in my 30 at the age of 30, but I'm not an expert yet. In my journey at work, I sometimes felt week, It doesn't mean that I'm not a methodical person. My job is quite free and gives me an extraordinarily fruitful feeling but it also requires me to be the person who is perfect in organizing some datas. That is why every year I buy a notebook for so I can manage my schedule well. My goal at the age of 30 is to finish writing personal organizer but it's not easy for me to do it every day. |