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제목 230412 Go to Symposium. 등록일 2023-04-12
내용 Tommrrow, I am going to Busan to attend International Symposium by train.

This Symposium will be held 3 days from Thursday to Saterday. and 900 doctors attend this Symposium including oversea

I will promote our drug to dortor at the booth all day.

This is the first symposium I participate on behalf of the company.

Therefore I spent lot of energy and focus, therefore I am very busy and tired. however I look forward to improving my professnal skiil for Product manager and I look forward to meeing the Board members of the Society I have to administer for sales.
담당강사 TiffanyS2usa 등록일 2023-04-12
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Tommrrow, I am taking the train to Busan to attend the International Symposium.

This Symposium will be held for three days, from Thursday to Saturday. Over 900 doctors from Korea and overseas will attend this Symposium.

During the Symposium, I will promote our drug to doctors at our booth.

This is the first symposium I will participate in on behalf of the company, therefore I spent a lot of energy and focus to prepare.  As a result, I am very busy and tired. However, I look forward to improving my professional skills as a Product Manager.  I also look forward to meeting the company's board members so I can facilitate sales.

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