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제목 Using public transportation 등록일 2023-04-20
내용 There are some benefits using public transportation. First, it's cheaper. I don't need to pay for the gas and the car insurance so I can save money. Second, it's convenient. I can spend personal time like I can listen to music and I can sleep there. These are the benefits of using public transportation instead of driving a car.
If I bought a car I will have it for about 10 years. Because buying a car is very expensive and I keep things for long time for environment.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-04-21
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There are some benefits using public transportation. First, it's cheaper. I don't need to pay for the gas and the car insurance so I can save money. Second, it's convenient. I can spend personal time like I can listen to music and I can sleep there. These are the benefits of using public transportation instead of driving a car.
If I bought a car I will have it for about 10 years. Because buying a car is very expensive and I keep things for long time for environment.
 

There are some benefits to using public transportation. First, it's cheaper. I don't need to pay for gas or car insurance, so I can save money. Second, it's convenient. I can spend personal time there, like listening to music or sleeping. These are the benefits of using public transportation instead of driving a car. If I buy a car, I will have it for about 10 years. Because buying a car is very expensive, I tend to keep it for a very long time.

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