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제목 | Doing laundry | 등록일 | 2023-04-25 |
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내용 | When doing laundry I usually hang dry laundry. Beacause it needs just natural reosurce sun and wind instead of electricity. Although it takes a lot of effort to hang it and take it. And it is time consuming. But it can protect environment. So I prefer to hang dry laundry. | ||
담당강사 | Vanessa1 | 등록일 | 2023-04-26 |
첨삭 내용 | When doing laundry I usually hang dry laundry. Beacause it needs just natural reosurce sun and wind instead of electricity. Although it takes a lot of effort to hang it and take it. And it is time consuming. But it can protect environment. So I prefer to hang dry laundry.
When doing laundry, I usually hang dry my laundry because it does not require electricity, only renewable natural resources like the sun and wind. Although hanging and removing it need a lot of work. So, I prefer to hang dry my clothes. |