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제목 Doing laundry 등록일 2023-04-25
내용 When doing laundry I usually hang dry laundry. Beacause it needs just natural reosurce sun and wind instead of electricity. Although it takes a lot of effort to hang it and take it. And it is time consuming. But it can protect environment. So I prefer to hang dry laundry.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-04-26
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When doing laundry I usually hang dry laundry. Beacause it needs just natural reosurce sun and wind instead of electricity. Although it takes a lot of effort to hang it and take it. And it is time consuming. But it can protect environment. So I prefer to hang dry laundry.

 

When doing laundry, I usually hang dry my laundry because it does not require electricity, only renewable natural resources like the sun and wind. Although hanging and removing it need a lot of work. So, I  prefer to hang dry my clothes.

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