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제목 Learning new hobby 등록일 2023-04-26
내용 I prefer to learn new hobby by internet. Here are the reasons. First, Motivation, I can get interested in new hobby by Internet. There are super amateurs online already. They say how it is good and posting picture doing new hobby. Second, Learning, they posting much information like how they sart it, how they sustain it and what the tools are.
For example, a few years ago, I challenged for 30 min running. people posting how it is good for health, how they developed it and they introduce useful application for begineers. So, I succeded new hobby challege .
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-04-27
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I prefer to learn new hobby by internet. Here are the reasons. First, Motivation, I can get interested in new hobby by Internet. There are super amateurs online already. They say how it is good and posting picture doing new hobby. Second, Learning, they posting much information like how they sart it, how they sustain it and what the tools are.
For example, a few years ago, I challenged for 30 min running. people posting how it is good for health, how they developed it and they introduce useful application for begineers. So, I succeded new hobby challege .

 

I prefer to learn a new hobby on the internet. Here are the reasons: First, motivation: I can get interested in a new hobby on the Internet. There are super amateurs online already. They say how it is good and post pictures of them doing new hobbies. Second, in learning, they post much information like how they start it, how they sustain it, and what the tools are.
For example, a few years ago, I was challenged to 30 minutes of running. People post how it is good for health, how they developed it, and how they introduce useful applications for beginners. So, I succeeded in a new hobby challenge.

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