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제목 Washing clothes 등록일 2023-04-26
내용 I have clothes that cannot be washed at home.Because that clothes made of wool. If I wash them at home, they would be shrinked and spoiled shape. So I usually take them to dry cleaner.

I think noise level is the most important when choosing a washing machine. Because I live in a small studio. If it so nosy I can't concentrate on studying or relaxing while using it. If it is quite I would be satisfied. So noise level would be the most important to me.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-04-27
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I have clothes that cannot be washed at home.Because that clothes made of wool. If I wash them at home, they would be shrinked and spoiled shape. So I usually take them to dry cleaner.

I think noise level is the most important when choosing a washing machine. Because I live in a small studio. If it so nosy I can't concentrate on studying or relaxing while using it. If it is quite I would be satisfied. So noise level would be the most important to me.

I have clothes that cannot be washed at home because they are made of wool. If I wash them at home, they would shrink and be in bad shape so I usually take them to the dry cleaner. I think the noise level is the most important factor when choosing a washing machine because I live in a small studio. If it's too noisy, I would not be able to concentrate on studying or relaxing while using it.  So, the noise level would be the most important to me.

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