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제목 | Making sentences using expressions I learned from the last class | 등록일 | 2023-04-28 |
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내용 | My mom went under the knife on her shoulder last week, so she was not able to use her right hand for the time being. But fortunately, My older sister lives with her and she can take care of mom. My older sister touched base with me yesterday to let me know mom's condition and feel. Plus, she went to the company and took sick leave for six weeks. After hearing about the new, I was relieved that there is a person who look after my mom for all day. |
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담당강사 | Neiz | 등록일 | 2023-04-28 |
첨삭 내용 | My mom went under the knife on her shoulder last week, so she was not able to use her right hand for the time being.
REVISED: My mom went under the knife on her shoulder last week, so she was not able to use her right hand for the time being.
Hi Tony, I just read and delve into your composition. Further to my previous comments, I just changed some terms that might be helpful to make the sentence more vivid to understand and would be more appropriate to have a clearer statement. Nevertheless, when using the expressions, I don't see any mistakes and you could relevantly use it to interpret what you wanted to convey. Keep up the good work! Enjoy your long weekend!
Teacher Neiz |