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제목 Today is holiday eve 등록일 2023-05-04
내용 I will have a holiday from tommorrow to sunday
Tommorrow is Children's day
I am glad that Children's day is a holiday
There are two holidays include a substitue holiday of Budda's birthday in May
I anticipate on having a familly trip to Seoul during a holiday
We are supposed to stay two days, one night in Seoul
We are also visit to our parent's houses, my mother and mother's in law on sunday
Monday is parent's day
My daughter didn't have a abroad family trip becase of COVID 19 during 3 years
She also couln't have a family trip because of me. I was a little busy in my work place
담당강사 Ruby 등록일 2023-05-04
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I have a holiday from tomorrow until Sunday because of Children's Day. 

I am glad that we celebrate Children's Day as a non-working holiday.

There are two holidays this May including a substitute day for Budda's birthday.

I'm looking forward to having a family trip to Seoul this coming holiday.

We plan on staying 2 days and 1 night in Seoul.

We will also visit my parent's house and my in-laws on Sunday because it's Parent's Day.

My daughter wasn't able to travel abroad for 3 years because of Covid19.

We also couldn't plan a family trip because of my busy schedule at work.

 

**Hi Wongyeong.

I hope this help. Have a good day. I will see you later in class. Thank you.

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